All Comments on 'Contrition'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 10 years ago
Yes

Beautiful start to an exquisitely written story.

Don't take too long to post the next chapter please

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
WHO IS BEING CONTRITE

and do the reasons really pertain to the facts. TK U MLJ LV NV

JendehJendehabout 10 years ago
great!

This was excellent. Please keep going. Love it thus far :)

urban_legend555urban_legend555about 10 years ago
An excellent start

to what I'm sure will be a well written piece. Congratulations. You set the bar very high.

OneShotOneOneShotOneabout 10 years ago
Excellent

5 stars. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

49greg49gregabout 10 years ago
Great!

Full on from the start and leaving me drooling for the next installment. This is great.

notusuallyshynotusuallyshyabout 10 years ago
So good

Very well written by two authors and seamless, very exciting left me pulsating

davinedavineabout 10 years ago
Top work.

A lovely start. I look forward to reading the rest.

49greg49gregalmost 10 years ago
Still great

I came back for a re-read and still great.

gspanker051gspanker051over 9 years ago
Very good

Good read two authors

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
sorry

I think I have read this story before, and did not care too much for it, since I thought this is not much of a love story as it is kidnapping and rape

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hooked from the start

What a great opening chapter. It makes reading on irresistible.

V.S.

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