All Comments on 'Dipped In Honey and Wine'

"He had found himself watching her shapely read and her breasts."

What is her "shapely read"??

I noted your correction. I think it should have been 'shapely rear'. Thanks

You had me from the beginning, how could I resist reading when my name is in the title ;)

I found your story charming and light-hearted. Your wittily clever and tongue-in-cheek writing style appeals to my personal taste as a reader. The text flowed well and I could not help but smirk and snigger in places that I found myself relating to. I particularly enjoyed the reveals of the little thoughts going through the man’s head.

As your first submission you should be proud of this piece and I look forward to reading your future writings.

I read it twice through by the way and as a female reader, not that I represent all or even any other females, it did hit the spot and thus, I gave it a 5 :)

Thanks so much for your appreciation. Will write more and do read.

Thanks so much, awkward611 and btgmon. :)