All Comments on 'Tiffany's Deception'

just real shit. nothing erotic and no , really no character likeable

Tiffany should've just left town or find somebody else to con.

Good start with setting Tiffany up. Looking forward to the next installment. Well written and like the power playing. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I like your work. Hope you don't take such a long break between chapters and stories. Can you add twists like our heroines introducing their friends (or enemies) to their lovers and/or their lovers friends?

We're impatiently waiting

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This was a good start. You created a plot with several twists plus the character development was perfect. It looks like Tiffany is going to end up becoming a slut for black cock while John gets to witness her transformation. One problem I found has nothing to do with your writing skills. Have the guy with that cheap imitation of a luxury car ditch the Lexus and get himself a true luxury car like a Bentley, Jaguar, BMW, Mercedes, or an Audi. Lexus is all plastic instead of real wood and real chrome. Not only that but the company was founded and is owned by Toyota. All it is is an overpriced Toyota.

You have real talent as a writer and that is an excellently constructed story. Quite erotic as well. Congratulations.

The previous anon must love the taste of shit after what they just spouted, what RUBBISH!

But still would prefer update of Joan and Kevin.

Oh my gosh that fucking sick bastard John like he's so fucking awful oh my gosh...

The sex was really hot! Thanks for the story!!

Love how this is going. It’s so hot seeing her getting turned around so that she finds herself in a position of giving the Blackman her pussy. Love everyone seeing how good she cums from having to submit to a Blackman especially when he shoots his cum in her. That was perfect, she obviously loves being on the losing end and weaker and having to submit. She’ll be hooked on being forced to give blackmen want they want in no time. She’ll make a perfect submissive whore for blackmen to use.