by eroslit
Wonderful story. I love the plot and it gives so much room for expanding it into as many episodes as you want. Keep adding to this beginning! It would be great to take the core of these six women and add one or two to each succeeding party. Any and all combinations would be great. I love how well you wrote this story and the attention to detail - enough to conjure visions but not enough to overwhelm the imagination! Sex and sexual pleasure is only partly physical; the mind really controls that pleasure. And your narative does stimulate both physical sensation and mental reaction. Well done!!
Just wants to say brilliant. Again. And if u have a copy of the Film..please advertise the premier. HaHa.
This writer certainy lives up to her moniker. If part of the purpose of erotic writing is to "get ones's juices flowing" eroslit's writings have certainly done this for me!