All Comments on 'Amber's Tale Ch. 01'

by Jessie92

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Does that happen?

I thought it was kinda cute that Amber became Michael's girlfriend without really realizing it. Could that really happen? Anyway, I'm looking forward to more. There's something here and I'm anxious to see it develop.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very nice start to a new series

I really enjoy reading your stories. I only read stories from a very small handful of authors on this site, you being one of the lucky few. The way you describe some of your characters, the quiet shyer types, is somewhat similar to me, which is part if the reason why I like reading your stories.

I really like how this series started and I can't wait to read the next one. I encourage anyone who hasn't read the descending of Jessica to read that series because it is really good, and kind of ties into this one.

Good job and keep up the good work.

Jessie92Jessie92almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks so much for your kind words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
My goodness!

You are quite the talented author. Usually, such descriptive sex scenes I find

rather boring. You, however, make them a part of character development.

Bravo...

Charlene

SejanusSejanusover 6 years ago

Nicely done. Not a bad coming of age/first time story.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 5 years ago
To answer your opening question...

LOVE your first person style!

It feels like you're sharing...actual first-hand experience.

Now...to get included! :+))

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