by timj_89
A little dry but it has potential. Good first effort. I encourage you to continue.
This story was hot, but the real victory is the anticipation you successfully built for the rest of the series. I'll be looking for it. :)
I actually enjoyed the tease element without it ending in sex or some huge unbelievable orgy. The open ending left good room for the sequel and its a shame there was not a further submission from the writer. Exhibitionism at its core I'd about the tease and I thought this was well portrayed here