All Comments on 'The Interview'

by timj_89

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Has potential

A little dry but it has potential. Good first effort. I encourage you to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Start

This story was hot, but the real victory is the anticipation you successfully built for the rest of the series. I'll be looking for it. :)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I actually enjoyed the tease element without it ending in sex or some huge unbelievable orgy. The open ending left good room for the sequel and its a shame there was not a further submission from the writer. Exhibitionism at its core I'd about the tease and I thought this was well portrayed here

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