by TamLin01
It reminded me a lot of Alan Garner's Owl Service and the ghost stories of M R James. There were a couple of things that jarred - 'clamoring over' something instead of clambering and the use of Scottish words like manse and glen when more appopriate Welsh colloquialisms might have been better. I could see this as a screen play - big old house, the beauty of the border vallies, the sexual tension between Sir Rowlad/Peter and Megan and Bryn and the otherworld elements. Superb piece of work!
Loved the style of writing and the smooth ease of all the elements that became greater than the sum of their parts.