All Comments on 'Goblins'

by TamLin01

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scipioparkinsscipioparkinsover 9 years ago
very good!

It reminded me a lot of Alan Garner's Owl Service and the ghost stories of M R James. There were a couple of things that jarred - 'clamoring over' something instead of clambering and the use of Scottish words like manse and glen when more appopriate Welsh colloquialisms might have been better. I could see this as a screen play - big old house, the beauty of the border vallies, the sexual tension between Sir Rowlad/Peter and Megan and Bryn and the otherworld elements. Superb piece of work!

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexover 9 years ago
Beautifully written

Loved the style of writing and the smooth ease of all the elements that became greater than the sum of their parts.

Blackpaw29Blackpaw29almost 3 years ago

Outstanding, and a true horror ending.

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