All Comments on 'The Truth Ch. 05'

by The_Fractal_King

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hurry up

Come on, I like your Story very much, but nothing is happening anymore. I mean it's quite repeating everything...

Maybe a new character from outside? Or an escape with coming back with a friend who Olivia will turn into the cult?

The_Fractal_KingThe_Fractal_Kingover 9 years agoAuthor
One Part Left

There's only one part left of The Truth (I wrote the whole thing before posting so I could keep a schedule) so we're just about done. The story is intentionally focused on what happens to Olivia specifically since I hadn't done that before. You might like Telos which has a larger cast.

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