All Comments on 'Keeping Up With the Joneses Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

OMG I LOOOOOVE YOU!!!! YOU JUST POPPED UP AND STOLE THE SHOW YAAAAASSSS!!!! ..yes I'm this excited when I see a new chapter from you on any of them ugh <3

CherrypeachCherrypeachover 9 years ago
Simply the best

I've fallen head over heels in love. My heart actually fluttered while reading this story. Sigh....... Moan.... Giggle...... Gasp.......sigh......smile. Your stories are outstanding. You're one of my favorites now. I adore Dylan and his total devotion to Prissy. I wish I had such a monster under and in my bed. 👏👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

KhamalaniKhamalaniover 9 years ago
Too cute

I don't see Dylan as a monster. Control freak maybe. But he loves his Prissy. They are adorable!! Another good story!! You've become my favorite author in record time!!

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

how does his mom feel about how he got prissy

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago
Nice

Nice, hot sequel to a hot original piece. Well done

nuerotiklyinclinednuerotiklyinclinedover 9 years ago

This is probably the best line I've read all year, "red velvet with cream cheese icing, southern girl kryptonite". As a true southern girl I can attest to the validity of this statement.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

They are an indescribable couple, in a good way. The way Dylan withheld those cupcakes from.her was ridiculous, but I loved her reaction when she was told the reason fir them being in the fridge. Great up payee. How far along is Prissy? Does she still work? I'm.eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this saga.

beautifulreaderbeautifulreaderover 9 years ago
Love it!

I've read and enjoyed your other works, but this is just perfect! I love the bdsm aspect of it and they are awesome together. The sex is fire, but I would like to see some emotional development. How does Prissy really feel about her new husband and baby? It all happened so fast, she has to be somewhat hesitant. Will she continue to work? And how exactly do Dylan and Prissy love each other? Just some things I'm interested in seeing but other than that, your story is great! Keep it up!

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 9 years ago
Cake, Cupcake, creamcheese icing.....Yeah you got me also!

Can I have a monster like that? Your description of the cupcakes, had me wet! You are right, you know "US SOUTHERN GIRLS!" I love this story, I would love more backstory on the couple, but I will take what I can get!

ILovethisstory!

cuteButSexy218cuteButSexy218over 9 years ago
Great Job!

I really love this couple and I am very happy you are continuing on. The trap was awesome and well played. With a sweet and spice of sexy seduction was a wonderful touch.

Please post soon :D

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 9 years ago
You had me at red velvet cupcake

That was some freaky shit with the event knife, but the rest I loved!! More please!

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezover 9 years ago
my goodness

now i'm hungry and i don't want a cupcake, more stories pls ;[

ncpecanpiencpecanpieover 9 years ago
Love It

I loved Monster Behind the Desk and was so happy to stumble upon this. Combination of interracial and domination. I wouldn't worry about the "low" rating. It's a great story! And yes I want a cupcake.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 9 years ago
Another Hit!

I love all your stories so much. Great job!

stepsonicstepsonicabout 9 years ago
So cute

Such a cute story! I like the cupcake material

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent!

Great pace, humor and sexy as hell!

MsljlillyMsljlillyover 7 years ago
Amazing

I re-read all of your stories occasionally. They are absolutely awesome.

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