All Comments on 'A Love Less Ordinary Ch. 02'

Very hot and very sexy. I love mom/son stories from the mom's pov. Can't wait for chapter 3.

I just love the idea of this being a true story I know that incest is going on but for you to tell your story is just so hot . Keep on with the telling of this hot mother son story and thank you for sharing . Jimmyj57

you are rock! , & quick update , thx ..

These two chapters have been the best I have read in a very long time. I enjoy reading mom-son sex stories but this has been so much better than most. I anxiously await the next installment(s). I look forward to the times shared when Daniel is working not too far from home and mom can get away to join him.

Rarely have I read a story that was this well written and still displayed the lust, desire, and raw sexual energy while simultaneously depicting nothing but love between these partners. Please continue this beautiful piece of work.

You don't even use you name, yet you criticize the author for trivial B.S.? No one gives a damn about your shitty opinions. Get your self righteous head out of your ass!

Personally, I like this story, even with some very unlikely sexual scenes, like when mom wanted to be eat twice in a row, as one example. Men and women become hypersensitive after orgasm and don't want to be touched again for quite some time. Al in all, though, this story was very erotic and romantic. 4 stars.

unusual approach, but worth reading.

I can't wait !!! Hurry and get it posted! I LOVE the story line......

A very good love affair between mom and son.

It's too bad that mom can't get pregnant, that would really throw a monkey wrench into the affair.

Thanks for the excellent read

Makes me so envious of "Daniel".

That you his mother would open up the way you did to him.

Even without the sexual component, I wish I had that free relationship with my Mum.

To actually be the FRIEND that she so needed. Because she didn't have it with dad.

Needs to be continued. Thanks

I would like to confess that I am a leacher. Generally, I read stories, enjoy it and just leave it there, but you made me change, I had to commend you for what you have just written, it makes me horny to the core. Daniel is really lucky to have a mom like you, however, I feel that he got it a bit too easy. I feel he should have really struggled to get you for the first time. Your emotional turmoil could have been explained deeper and the first time, he should have forced himself on you and then if you would have built it up from there....I know it's easier said than done. JUST AMAZINGGG....KEEP IT UP...- FrenchnLover

Why. Well her first submission was so hot erotic and a new angle it supports it being true. Plus why lie? Second I fucked a lot of moms and I can tell you with absolute confidence the acts that took place in her writing many mothers do and then some. I had one mother had me DP her first with both ends of a double-sided dildo and other times with her in the missionary position a vibrating dildo in her pussy being pumped in by me as I thrust my cock in her ass not to mention this woman has given me BJs while her son was in the room while his attention was primarily on his xbox game. She also role played with me which I played the role of her son. So to think mothers like this don't exist would be naive. In fact I talked to one that fucks her boys and told me how it all began. They are not always rednecks living in a trailer. Sometimes or a lot of times incest takes place in the suburbs.

Brilliant story, can't wait for more!!

I started having a romantic relationship with my mom when i was 40 and she was 61.

i am 50 now and it has been ten years of the best sex ever !! We spend days or nights together whenever we can with her in lingerie , heels and stockings and me in a t-shirt with no pants on so she has constant sight and access to my fat thick swollen cock.

i have been married 25 years to a great girl who is 5 years younger and is great in bed....but NOTHING can ever cum close to the hot wild and intense sex i share with mommy.

even at 71 she is my dream girl with big tits and a smooth shaved pussy that rocks my world.....

xoxo more please

I fucked my bestfriend mom when i was 19.He caught us, but i didnt care and his mom even told he could watch(it was a bit cruel because i knew it he had a oedipus complex).I got smug, and was always striking him(i am banging you mom...).We got too much out of control and in a day doing a revenge(he tried to beat me but i am five inches bigger than him), i tied him and made his mom peed on his face, and i fucked her above him.After that, he run away from home, and his mom went berserk and ended with me.I was a true womanizer and asshole back then.I was too much immature and had a lot of envy because their love(my mom died when i was a baby).Now, more than fifteen years later, i saw then in a park with a 12-13years-old girl with a striking ressemblance of his mom.His mom is in her mid fifties, and is a statuesque woman. He was holding her hand like a husband does.

I miss him and her, but my stupidy(and ego) got the best of me.

Paul(from Spain).

Thank you for sharing your story.

Hi ! Act one was superb! Act two was action personsonified. You have me drooling for Act 3. Such an interesting play.

Thanks Don

looking reallly forward to part 3!

A masterful stroke or erotic writing - got so excited and masturbated several times, even played out the scene about letting Daniel enter my arse, my boyfriend never had it so good. - can't wait for next chapter.

a powerful true story

Superb writing skills and imagination. I'm especially enjoying the evolving relationship and all its complexity.

Good story, but the Husband/Father is going to be hurt or destroyed badly in the end

I do think that mom (although never having had anal before) should have had the foresight that maybe a Fleet Enema before the anal sex might have cleaned her out a little and saved the messy part of anal sex. No mention made of shit on his dick or on the bed, very convenient. I guess you can't think of everything. All that crap and messy stuff is a turnoff (of course there are a very few that like all that stuff). As someone mentioned, this can only turn out bad unless there is a convenient heart attack or auto accident to get rid of the father or he runs away with his secretary or maybe turn gay. That would be the least damaging scenario, dad would realize that he is gay and leaves mom and son a nice settlement and they could move away and everyone would be happy with no real hard feelings. That would also explain his lack of interest in sex with her. Maybe I will write a story someday but I doubt it. I have read from different sites but I believe that Literotica is far the best, there are very few new situations but Literotica writers provide more entertainment. Thank you for writing this, author, I will read your next chapter when I run across it later.

Why was Chapter 3 removed?

Because French has been called out on her story being B.S., so she's either too chicken to post more or she's been frantically rewriting her "diary" to make it sound more realistic.

Yeah, sons do fuck their mothers. Not saying that doesn't happen, but this is crapola from a writer begging for attention.

chapter 3 should have more adventurous sex, outside the house and with a lot out of ordinary.

Forgive me for saying this, Frenchn3 but for me, somehow, this story lacks 'erotic-ness' (made up word) despite the subject which fascinates many of us. Nevertheless, do continue with your writings and strive to excite us a bit more!

Man o man this is a fantastic story. It is well written, the characters are well developed and the emotions and romance are totally right on point. Easily the best of the best story on the site. Their love story is for the ages. I can not wait for the next chapter to see what and how they end up together forever. Hopefully next chapter(s) are ready soon. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Pls post another one u r so sexy and if I had a mom like that I would fuck her so hard

Loved it.Oh I want to be a believer, The heart demands it ! Top 5...(so far).Would love to read like everything up to today.Ups or downs.Earnestly waiting ;-)

Hopefully chapter 3 will be posted soon. Thanks for sharing.

Keep swallowing your sons cum and let him fill your pussy with his hot seed!!! Keep writing, I can't get enough!!

Loved this story & the 2 main characters.

Unfortunately, I don't understand how this ends on a positive note. Will Natalie divorce her husband to be with her son? Will she have children with her son? What happens to the father?

This could go in so many different directions...

give mother a baby

...which is a shame, since this was a very sexy story.

Love Chapters 1 & 2!! Would you please post Chapter 3 already!!!

and then one day he told me he wanted me and I said no, but within a few hours my desire for him, born of nothing, was uncontrollable and we were soon fucking in the closet at a New Year's Eve party and I decided I just had to tell you this incredible true story, and then lost interest half way. And its all true. Yeah, right.

please post chap 3 plez

please don't stop many of us are now waiting for the next episode with bated breath, don't disappoint us

But what happened? No chapter 3. You guys must have got caught. You both were taking WAY too many chances to not get caught eventually and probably very soon...

this is exactly the kind of story that needs to be written in taboo category; this is what makes the category special; unlike some stories that use mom use as a sexpot, this is so refreshing and nice; this is the kind of story I been longing to read; total, real love between mom and son. No one will love him like his mom. Please don't spoil it by bringing another into the fold just for the sake of twists. Even if it is only a fantasy, it is a great fantasy. Let him marry her. Let them exchange vows and rings to bind them together forever. Please don't let it degrade into something vile. Let the vile happen just in the bedroom. This is what I always wanted in an incest story, and your story fulfilled the purpose. Good work.

where are the continues chapters, we are very 😟upsets, pleaaaaaaase complete the story. it was the better ever here, i read a hundreds of, but no one are even the half level of urs. just keep going pleas pleas pleaseee

something so naughty about a mother and son incest, but its a whole new level when son takes moms anal virginity. and the whole last part with the role play , that was mind blowing

Can u go into more detail about anal please!! 5 stars

My God, you have any idea how creamy you have made my daughter and I.

We think Daniel might need help finding a Slut like his Mom/girlfriend, as a mommy I have steered my family to people I think are like Daddy and Mommy. It has worked well hehe.

Keep writing,

H&K

Annie

Mam your son is so lucky and blessed to have you as his mother. Hope that I get to do that with my own mom. Waiting for more chapter between you and your son.

Did Chapter 3, 4, 5, 6 etc never materialize?

As much as I enjoyed all that you shared in 1 & 2, it is a deep disappointment to realize 6 years have passed since these were posted with never an update.

Hope all is well with you, and wanting to think that in the years since things have evolved for you in a positive way.

As a romantic, tis is the most beautiful incestuous love story between mother and son I have ever read! I hope their life continued as well as the story has presented. I hope the respect, adoration, passion and intimacy between mother and son continue to this day. Someday I hope the author is able to continue this series for another 10-20 chapters. Realizing all lives have ups and downs, I hope the honesty, passion and love between mother and son continue to this day..

OMG! Your writing is scorching hottttt!!! I can't tell you how many times I've gotten off thinking about you. Wish I had been braver with my mom. Found out years after I was grown that she had wanted me from the time I was a teenager. Please continue your series.

Awesome story but I'm curious. Your bio says you're female & into females. So how is it you're so in love with your son? Did the husband find out & kill you both? Is that why there are no more chapters after these two? I'd sure wish my mom had given in to me or I'd been more aggressive in going after her & not taken no for an answer. Cause I know we had something special at one point in our lives.

I guess part 3 was a lie.

A worthy retelling.

I truly hope things turned out where no one was hurt, and that love prevailed.

Rates high in my list of favs. Luvs.

Best I've ever read!! Thanks for your efforts.

I reread it.Still great the second reading.