by MVPrimetime
More please!
I hope it's true or at least your just for a young woman is real.
I know my lust for a young woman is real.
Please continue with this story. Cum in her mouth as she looks into your eyes.B
Great story! Not rushed into the sex just building up to the point where he shows Katie what her body wants and needs making her cum a few times first and letting her explore his body so she became comfortable with it and his cock.
Thanks for not having the huge cock and tits, it pisses me off that writer think they have to have 10" cocks and DDD Tits to make a story, when I see that I stop reading.
It is nice to be appreciated. I should perhaps say that I put up another story, on the same day, also about an older man and you woman, called "Curls." I had started this story and wasn't sure about it, then started "Curls" and then came back to this one - so I posted both together to see how they were received.
So well written. You've written a beautiful story with an actual storyline and well paced young girls first time. Well done
Most natural and well paced story I ever read. Too good- Every man worth his self must be Sensitive , Sensible and be like Sean when it is Sex.
I really enjoyed your story. The characters were very well drawn, and quite realistic. I would like to see more of this tale!
As I read the story, my mind wandered back, filled with
past memories, of Romancing and Loving those wonderful
moments of ultimate bliss !!!! Thank you, Ladies, from the bottom
of my heart !!!! " Oh, what Wonderful Memories, all of you,
have left with me, to Cherish and Care For, all the rest
of my days !!! "
Dennis
A beautiful thoughtfully written piece. Good backstory and nice slow appropriate build up. I'd love to read a further instalment of these characters' story. x
I would love accidents like that in my life. I guess its true what they say, 'Redheads really do have more fun'.
Believable characters, good pacing, great job on his inner dialogue. I appreciate the fact that you write well and can create a story that warms the heart as well as the loins. Thanks for a very satisfying read.
What a lucky girl! I wish my first was like that. You write so well, it feels real. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.