All Comments on 'A Love Story: Quentin and Kiana'

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Anonymousover 9 years ago

Sigh.....

What a jumbled mess

MySecretSide over 9 years ago

Glad

I was glad to see that her sister came back. I would have loved to know more about what she suffered. It was still a good story. Hats off to you Iread.

ariesgirl over 9 years ago

Loved it...I enjoy reading your stories.

Squirt65 over 9 years ago

Self editing???

Please. If Your going to self edit, please take Your time and proof read. I love Your stories but all the mistakes take away from the story.

thruholewizard over 8 years ago

another great story

I love how the stories dovetail into one another ......I love the sentimental style to your writing and I am a big fan of the happy ending .

Stephen J

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Nice

OK, I love your stories but they need editing as soon as possible; serious editing. Also, they are a little simplistic; the editing should help on this front. I hope you are not offended by this comment.

Annabelle

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