All Comments on 'My Birthday Surprise'

by fflover58

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent

Brilliant. Thanks for the story.

It has been quite a while since anyone has written something good such as this. Please keep up the good work!!

Happy Holidays :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep it up!

More please! Great story! When can we expect another? :)

fflover58fflover58over 9 years agoAuthor
Next story in development

To my readers,

Thank you for the comments and favorites. I had a really hard time finishing up this story, let me tell ya! It did, however, give me some motivation to write more. I've got another new story in the works, and I think it will be even better. Hoping to get it done over the weekend and up next week. Happy Holidays all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent!!'

Please write more. Really enjoyed reading it.

fflover58fflover58over 8 years agoAuthor
A Sequel?!

I wish I could reply to the anonymous comments directly. Really love the attention to this story, considering it was written on a whim. A previous comment I made may have been taken out of context, as I meant I was writing other stories-not a sequel to this. However, I cannot resist any longer. As of now, an idea for a sequel is formulating in my head, with a tentative holiday release. Please, give my other works a peek if you haven't already!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it!

Especially where she's swapping spit with Daddy on her little toes.

Licking his cum off her toes was perfect.

Keep up the good work!

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