All Comments on 'Mental Manipulations Ch. 06'

great series! love it - 6 stars. my only suggestion would be to put the thoughts in italics to separate them from the spoken dialogue.

great story keep it up hope it won't be six months for the next chapter.

as the chapters progress I am better understanding and enjoying this kind of subject. Looking forward to the future chapters.

Women stupid fuck toy bimbos and a guy who actually is interested in their pleasure, not just his.

Well done!!!

I've been following this story and I can't wait for more!!! I agree with Whackdoddle and lefric.

I see your not a prolific poster, but I would really like to see additional chapters. Waiting is not my strong suit. Keep'm coming

get back to Sarah and focus on her.

please.

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I hope that you will continue this to some kind of reasonable end. It's too good of a story to just let it die on the vine!

Good story like to read more i would love to find out the so called church man is found out and then arrested for killing her parents for money since that seems to be all he wants.

Still keen for more of the story, youve really got something going well here. Great plot. Please keep posting

How both adding some more chapters to this story? You kinda left it hanging. Your a good writer and I enjoy your work. I see your still posting stories (01-15-15 & 05-08-15). Please continue this one, it has great potential. Pastor's wife, the pastor himself, Kurt and his buddy seem interesting.

Great story. I just know that Becky will fit into your next chapter as the story unfolds.

You can write but this story could use shorter sex scenes and more dialog. You have an interesting premise that needs further development. Work at telling the story

OK why did you stop you had a good story going

I love this series and would love to read more. I don't know about the author or anybody else, but I really feel like someone needs to get pregnant in this series! More! More! More!

You Rat !!!

Normaly I avoid getting into a story that has a large number of pages or chapters,but you have got me hooked on this one.

Dam You for doing such a great job on the story!

But is it not missing a chapter or two ???

Please continue this series - Really enjoyed it so far and really want to find out how it progresses...

looking forward to another installment sometime...want to see what happens with the pastor, who of course was the source of his problem/power/accident. :-)

I've found that entering a new pussy, being large and thick can cause some partner distress. Additionally, it's poor style.

Some discription of the feel of the sweet sleeve on the Johnson would be a very nice touch.

I always notice the criticism comes from anonymous good story and any man would do exactly the same keep up the great work loving this series 👍🏻

If you don't care enough to proofread, so you don't change Kurt's last name or Roxy's niece's first name, why should we care enough to give you a good rating?