All Comments on 'A Bachelorette Party'

I liked the concept for the story, but some plot and character development would have been nice. It would have made it more of a story than a raw description of sex.

Thank you, everyone.

Altough I liked the hot and epic party in this story, let me point out a detail: as the second guy came on Cherry's face, you can not say later she had two loads on her breasts. Okay, some drops can drop down but not the whole load....

As soon as the intended finds out that his fiancee is a slut,he'll avoid the major mistake of marrying the twat!

I had a hard time getting past the issues with the grammar. I think with editing this story could be a lot better.