I write a lot as part of my job and have edited creative writing on and off for years. I'm happy to advise on pacing, flow, suggest alternatives etc. as well as picking up on grammar and spelling (but PLEASE check that stuff before you send it over!) If I feel there's a lot to do I probably won't give you a line by line analysis, but really enjoy helping folk improve, so I've been a little selective of what categories I'll edit as the others are not genres I think I'd be very helpful with.