A college English professor by trade, I am tired of reading boring and formulaic freshman comp. I am not here working as grammar police, even though I can help you straighten out your "its, it's; your, you're" problems. If you are looking for a sounding board to try your erotic ideas, perhaps you can use some suggestions to improve your plot and character development. Over the past two months I have worked with a few writers and got them accepted here. I write some stories myself. If you like what I write, then maybe I can be helpful to you.