I am a lifetime writer IRL, an occasional writer here on the site, and someone that enjoys a well-written erotic story. I like stories that are real, not bizarre manufactured, or contrived. If it sounds like it is realistic, it will appeal to the reader. Not afraid to point out where something can be improved (plot, characterization) if that is what you seek. Also my grammar and spelling are impeccable. Would enjoy the chance to help in any way you like.