All Comments on 'A Long Christmas Eve.'

Very nice cartoon!

Well that was interesting. My first cartoon I ever read on Lit. Well it was good. I liked the imagery but the text was so damn small that at times I was ignoring your story and skipping panels because cbf reading small text.

If text was bigger coupled with those images then i'd say it's 5 stars. Right now as is 3.5. (Since I can't give 3.5 i chose 4)

Thanks though for my first cartoon.

Great renderings

Hello, I'm a heterosexual male who, in the absence of a relationship or sexual opportunities, delights in seeing tenderness expressed in erotic art. Sadly, I've spent thousands of hours over the years looking for erotic images on the internet but with only very limited success. There's plenty of porn around but such a small proportion of porn is actually erotic.

Seratsfg, your illustrations are truly excellent. In my opinion, they are very erotic indeed and you know how to produce well-written, sexy and witty captions to match your images.

However, as I read your story, completely spellbound, I felt as if the magic ended abruptly when the male character arrived. Until that moment, the fantasy was exquisite. Male intervention led to a cliched scenario and an unerotic cliched use of language. Previously, there had been something quite special - unusual and unexpected. Maybe it's just a simple matter of personal preferences in erotica, but I felt that this male character was a bit too over the top and that you were paying lip service to the conventions of animated and live porno.

I do hope that you continue doing work of this kind in the future and that you find a way of making it pay. In my opinion, you have exceptional skill and talent! Thank you for enhancing my life with your mega-erotic story. :)

FaithWhite, I had the same problem, till I clicked on a picture to bring it up in a larger panel and then used the buttons to scroll through.

The graphics really brought the story alive. Don't stop writing and creating now, keep going!

The artwork was so beautiful, I melted into the story. I want those shoes!

The body art is magnificent. Kudos to you.

YOUR FAN'S RIGHT - EVERYTHING PETERED OUT WHEN THE STUPID PRICK/PIG/MALE JERK APPEARED.

BEFORE THAT IT WAS EROTIC AND LOVELY, SWEET & SEXY.

GO PROFESSIONAL - YOU MUST KNOW ABOUT DRUUNA FROM 'HEAVY METAL' - 'HEAVY METAL' MUST ALREADY KNOW ABOUT YOU - GO FOR IT - YOU'RE THE NEXT ONE!

YUKI

I'm new to these comics. If yours are the average, I will never read a story again. I love the colors, the bodys. Some panels are a bit dark but I enjoyed every one of them.

I thought the lezbabe was a bit too skinny but what the fuck, its your comic.lol

Thanks for a very enjoyable time. Going to look for more of your stuff.

What an outstanding collection of cock hardening cum inducing art work!!!! I cummed in the middle and again at the end - I just couldn't keep my hand off my cock - it made me so fucking horny!!!!!!! Keep up the hardcore = fucking sight better than movies!

All you could ask for,plot art work,truly cock hardening.Please please please give us more.

Truly great!

The only complaints I hae about it is that's, it's too dark in some paniels. And the second is. I guess it's not much as a complaint but more of an observation, it feels more like a Helloween Theme story but set during Christmas. Brovo. Brovo!

5 years later, you're still FAB - I'm Yukimi from 2013

The drawing quality is perfect.

I'd prefer a more gentle story: the two women bond and deeply enjoy each other.

AND Chris not be such an ass-hole.

The best art I have seen here. Thank you. Not big on the chains

Great! I particularly liked the Long Nails and Lipstick on Jessica - a turn on for me!

I liked the contrast between the two ladies.....

Although I am a straight male the Lesbian Sex scenes were the best!!!

The Graphics were a nice in-between real and "comic"

Liked the colouring and the lighy