All Comments on 'Big Bad Boy'

wonderful art work and story. Cant wait for next chapter

It's like one of my fantasies, good work over all! ;)

Illustrations ok for cgi, but the dialogue and internal thought balloons

just don't bear any resemblance to the way that ANYONE in the English

speaking world communicates,either verbally or in print. If you, the

creator are new to the English language, this is understandable and can

be addressed by teaming up with a literate English speaker. However, if

you were raised in an English speaking environment, you need to

facilitate a major change in your story telling.Someone experienced in

writing collouquial English needs to write these for you in order for them

to be received seriously. This must be done before you contribute again.

Someone who knows basic English needs to revise all your copy so that

your characters have some resemblance to REAL people. GOOD LUCK.

SUPERB AND FANTASTIC - EVERY MAN'S FANTASY - BIG TITS AND A BIG COCK THAT STAYS HARD AND A WOMAN WHO COMES AND COMES HARD , WITH FIRM BUT SOFT TITS - CAN'T ASK FOR MORE - YOU'RE GREAT!

Big bad boy is great, I love an erotic story and this one was very erotic, Keep these coming.

The only continuation worth seeing is when the husband takes the gun and shoots the jerk who fucked his wife, and maybe the wife too.

First of all, you do know that is RAPE!!!!! When a woman says 'no' she means NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Jack ass!! typical Rape story, girl says 'no' but ends up enjoying it it's sick. Every Story in the Nonconsent/Reluctence Section of this site is like that. I get it it's a fantasy, but that just gets a little old, it's like waching nothing but Girl on Girl on porn. And second of all understandable sometimes those Translator apps are not that greatest it needs some imporvment in that era. And last but not least, overall the story itself could have been better if I had Issue 1. What the hell happen to Issue 1? Did you forget to write it?

This illustrator is really Excellent.

Yukimi

love your illustration - love the way they fuck