All Comments on 'Conni gets new boobs'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your story and art are OK. But the presentation on the monitor screen is too small when you show two pages at a time.

Take and show one page in close up so you can read the text and see the picture clearly. Also, place the camera directly perpendicular to the page so you do not distort the picture or the text. [ | ] angle and not [/] or [\]. I know that might make the flash glare on a spot. You may be able to soften the glare of the flash by using a rubber band or tape so hold a single layer of tissue paper over the flash.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

PS I see some of the pages are double page pictures and my suggestion doesn't solve the issue of being hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good scans of each panel would probably help this a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fun for the whole family.

Gotta love it

5 stars!!!

Thanks

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 2 years ago

NEEDS TO BE SHARPER, LOOKS LIKE GLARE AND HARD TO SEE, NEEDS DARKER ,COLORS TOO LIGHT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I LOVE IT

DepravedDepictionsDepravedDepictionsover 1 year ago

Fabulous. Depraved, just as I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We like the artwork, and the story is cute.

nylonpunkienylonpunkieover 1 year ago

That was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing it with us! xx

TrebZzajTrebZzajover 1 year ago

Awesome, now start an write more of Connies stories :D

LeafheadLeafheadover 1 year ago

Pleeze make more of this comic. Really can be expanded.

SandrajoSandrajoabout 1 year ago

Really good. Nice and dirty (well, filthy actually!) and the drawings are more than good enough to make it really sexy.

Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature12 months ago

Ultra creative! The mind reels with possible sequels!

IJS0904IJS090412 months ago

Very creative and very funny.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Like it, clever!

ZapperzZapperz8 months ago

Funny and clever.... needs prequels as well as sequels!

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