by Rebeccasm
The concept is good, as are the illustrations, but the dialogue needs a lot of editing. It seems to have been written by someone whose English is not at native speaker standard.
I had gotten many feedbacks to continue this series and did mention English is not my native language. If you like I have other story that is written by native English speaker that you could read. May be is time for me to stop.
Please don't give up, Your English is completely understandable to anyone who knows the language, even if not native speaker. Most of the people who speak English aren't native speakers anyway!
I agree this story is far from complete - please continue your artwork is superb and far outweighs any other minor issues - long may you continue x
I personally really like your stories. The best part is the pictures. You are a fantastic artist and I always look forward to updates to your stories.
I am really enjoying your work. English not being your first language, I can still easily follow the storyline and your artwork is excellent, so please continue your storytelling.