All Comments on 'Kiss me like that-'

by NextDoorSecret

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blin18blin18over 8 years ago
Stunningly evocative

I don't know art, but I know sexy, and this picture is it.

There's not much more I can say than what's in the tribute - Jenna's Choice - above, except to apologize for my multiple misinterpretations. I wrote Jenna's Choice in the cafeteria at lunchtime, and I'm too repressed to have a picture like that up on my laptop in public, so I wrote from memory.

I love the way the framing, the colour, and the coarse focus make the picture slightly ambiguous. It lets me imagine them in public, in a dance club, rather than in private - that dials up the sexy meter for me.

Lovely art, NextDoorSecret. Thanks for sharing. And I hope to collaborate again.

TerrytheTravelerTerrytheTravelerover 8 years ago
Difficult to make a comment...

Difficult to make a comment without letting my "guy" show but the graphic and the text are a HOT combination. Congratulations to you both and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Beautiful

Very sexy and sensual. Love the artwork. Shows true passion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Passion

Amazing drawing!

todski28todski28over 8 years ago
sexy

And evocative truly inspired drawing. Loved the write that went with it

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 8 years ago
What comes first?

I didn't count, but pictures are easily worth a thousand words ... And that includes Praise for the collaborators. Brava

So what really did come first?

Only these two know for sure. But the truth is ... There was a meeting of mind and body, the rhythem or the beat, words or picture; either way, two souls made 1st contact. I have experienced such a moment back in the late 70's, on a dance floor and it closely resembled this picture. The situation was made public on the news, and the club was almost closed. The local free press spoofed the club and "gave them permission" to continue... As long as the participants didn't look like they enjoyed themselves ... Too much. The club survived and lives on today. Private clubs and private lives should remain private; LIVE ON!!!!

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 8 years ago
Thanks to Blin18

Thanks to both ... Artists. I might never have realized Erotic Art was a category within Literotica if Blin18 had not put out the much appreciated Alert to her readers.

LyricalliLyricalliover 8 years ago
Very nice collaboration

The illustration is beautiful: sexy and stark. I'm really drawn to it. Blin18 did a lovely job on the writing for it, and I'm so glad she posted about it. Really well done.

bearsladybearsladyover 8 years ago

It took me awhile to get here and I'm so glad I finally did. The artwork is erotic and the story fits it beautifully. Well done by both.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 7 years ago
Erotic

Most erotic drawing ever

eideticeideticover 6 years ago
Excellent!

I got here because of Blin18. It was in her favorites and I got curious.

Your art is wonderfully erotic without being blunt. Just plain enticing and I really appreciate your talent. Now I'll go check and see if you've posted other artwork equally as impressive. Thank you for sharing.

Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelinealmost 6 years ago

It looks like an adaptation of a photo - nothing wrong with that, I noticed the proportions, perspective and shading are just about perfect.

You need to do more of this style of art. Waiting...

gregscottgregscottalmost 3 years ago

I looked at the picture and then read the words. The words took me from a quick look at a drawing and a sigh of "Nice erotic drawing, NEXT" to a complete understanding of the build up of this erotic moment, probably the most erotic kiss in her life that will be remembered and cherished until her dying moment. I now see the picture in a brand new light, the hair pulled back to expose her neck and what it took to get there. The bawdy dress of the clubbing attire that shows this is a public place where this occurs. Hot faux leather short-shorts with hot wet newly bald Vaginas barley hidden from the public views. Loud pumping music that hides all that happens on a dance floor behind the teaming mass of bodies undulating in fever and Passion to the beat of the perfect music. In this living breathing undulating mess of sweaty hormones the picture is captured and set here for us to now understand its true depth and meaning.

I feel like I did as a teenager with my high school Europe trip (1984), standing in front of the Mona Lisa at the louvre museum thinking "Ya it's an old picture of a smiling girl". Only to have the eloquent tour guide describe it in a way that made me want to reach into my own soul and slap it for being so thoughtless and unemotionally equipped to gaze at this work of art.

My only intent was seeing what other authors likes were , thanks Blin18. I'm now a fan.

Sincerely yours

admirer

GregScott

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