All Comments on 'Pen and ink penis'

Don't put yourself down. If you already know its not good, which I believe it is, you need to better yourself.

Not bad. Overall you have a good sense of form, especially in her legs. Her left arm is the weakest part of the sketch. Hands (and feet) are very hard to do, and, when beginning, it is best to suggestion the shape rather than striving for too much detail.

I sketch, and appreciate the challenge of managing shapes, edges, and values. By all means continue.

I think you expressed yourself very well

On the contrary, I think this is VERY good. It's faithful enough in representation to invite imagination, which is what I appreciate most about erotic art. The shading is done very well. Overall, a striking and effective piece.

Yes, I think it's captured the essence of the subject and particularly like the fact that her breasts are not oversized!

I like this, you’ve got the weighting in the body just right. Keep at it, you’ll only improve with practice, but it’s already very sex - love the slightly gaping labia.

good proportion. I do not understand the title pen and ink - penis

It's honestly not that bad, just some construction issues. Did you have a model or a reference? The first thing that strikes me as odd are her arms. Her left arm seems a bit short and there doesn't seem to be much indication that her hand is separate from the arm. Other than that there is not much that is glaringly off and I think you are on the right track!

Sorry about the title. There was a mixup over which exact image I was trying to publish. If Literotica ever gets around to publishing what I submitted February 28, you will see the intended drawing.

I like the simplicity! and the use of shading

I like this...a;lot.

Please don't be harsh on yourself saying its not good.

How about one of a male in a similar position, with a lovely upwardly curving erection?

That'd be very nice.

Love

Saucy Masquerade.

Very well drawn. It is a shame that you did not draw the head and shoulders. But the art work is erotic!

I think it's really good. I like parts of the body that cast shadows on themselves. Lok fwd to more

Wow! This is beautiful!

There's an eloquent simplicity in this drawing, the basic but very effective shading, the deeper and almost three dimensional depiction of her pudenda. Her legs and belly I particularly like, very much, there's a natural thickness to her thighs. This is a real woman you've depicted here.

It's a bit of a shame that her left arm isn't right, but you'll know that already - and it doesn't spoil the overall effect of the drawing.

Knowing how hard it is to find a comfortable style, I'd say this is very effective and eloquent. Nice work. I'm going to follow, to see more. It's a shame, Lit's not the best platform for art, but at least you get some feedback - in that regard it's better than Tumblr, which is pretty much silence, these days.

On the contrary, I like the shadowing. Well done!

Very well done!!

Looks good guite hot

Nicely done.

I think your selling yourself short , very nice and Very Sexy ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought the penis drawing was a little amateurish, the reclining nude is beautifully done. You captured the sexual feeling of the poser with artful nuance. Do some more.

Remain positive, enjoy your line work. As a fellow Artist, i know we are our own harshest critics