All Comments on 'Sárkány (Zarkon) and Daiyu'

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LeloineLeloineover 1 year ago

As an artist myself I had to learn to shed my thin skin, and then to look through others eyes. I like the subject very much but the shadows need to be enhanced. On the winged beast the left leg needs more to bring out the curvature of the calf, as well as the right leg from mid thigh all the way down. I would have made him much more muscular than what he is and have him leering down at the girl.

Smoke6969Smoke6969over 1 year ago

Nice big cock for the maiden to play with.

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