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gnome_mangnome_manover 3 years ago

The poem is good. It is constructed consistently from stanza to stanza, though I don't know the rules for writing a limerick. My guess is that you've carefully attended to them.

The drawing is superb. She is lovely and sexy. Her eyes are so expressive. They are studying her three fellow cardplayers, watching for tells and waiting to make her move.

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