by dominanceaddict1
Am not, in general, a fan of the illustrated erotic story. Not sure exactly why, but I think it is similiar to not liking music videos. Sort of guides the imagination in ways it might not go without the visual representation - and your stories are evoke such strong mental images (for me)... seeing an artist's renditions of your words sort of lessens the imact of what I am reading.
Someone who is not as strong a writer as you may produce a story that benefits from visuals - but - and trust me on this - your work is too good to get mucked up by a single artist's vision of what is going on. And that is not a dig on the quality of the artwork... because, as such things go, the artwork for this story is pretty decent. But you don't write stories that need pictures...
And... you should always try different things - so I applaud the effort even if the result isn't quite what suits my preference.
I looked for the name in the members section of Literotica and didn't find her name.
Could you send me the link to find her works?
Fabulous pictures good story, what is not to like. Veeery hot. Thanks for this morning treat.
Very hot story, hope you make more stories with Devin, maybe Devin answering a call to RyanΒ΄s frat house. Good job
You too make a great tag team :-)
Alison your full frontal of Ryan (#37) is exquisite - frame-able.
Great, creative story line that took me in some new directions, thanks!
Would love to see more from you both...
While I'm married and consider myself straight, I've enjoyed the stories of Ryan's uber masculinity and dominance of men like me. I've formed a mental picture of him and in reading the stories I've imagined him tall and thick and of course much better endowed than I am. But this story has given me a very real image and as I brought myself off twice on page 2 and once on page 3 this past weekend, I'm thinking I may not be as straight as I've long told myself. And as a very dark Jamaican to be cuckolded by a white 18 year old.......yeah, not so straight maybe.
Sure itβs βstraightβ - but even guys can admire big pecs, calves and cock on a stud like Ryan. An equally big thank you to you!
Great story like all your others. Loved the illustrations. Brought the story to life. You should illustrate your other stories, CD, Gay, Transgener, Etc. You are now one of my favorite authors. Would love to see more like this. Keep up the good work.