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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Definitely need proofreading help.

"...smarted person..." ? Taking time to proofread can stop mistakes like this.

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Stories are just too much fun to not write them. I scribble short stories and now novels. I doodle sexy images. And I do both to create visual novels and games. I'm currently working on a visual novel version of "A Matter of Will," available for free, with a new chapter every...