by MacSlither
Nice al though I am partial to your original style. Black and white with a splotch of colour hits my aesthetic a little harder
Funny AND sexy. Your drawing style clearly shows the GF's mix of fear of being found out playing 'nookie', keeping her job by somehow retaining enough non-orgasmic awareness to edit the spreadsheet and pure lust. Will look at more of your works. High marks for this funny illustration.
I like the picture fine. You need to make your text lettering bolder to improve legibility.
Just look at any news paper cartoon section and you will find excellent examples of what I mean. iPad should provide you some options that is better than a thin pencil line you used. Try a much thicker or wider line for writing any text. Block letter printing is the best option, in my opinion.
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