All Comments on '02/08 --- Your Song'

should be shared. TK U MLJ LV NV

"Be careful

love, tug at my heart more

and it will be my footsteps

gracing the threshold of your door."

What more is there to say?

So seductive, your song, with word patterns alluring and beckoning.

+ shows thought in the arrangement and the sound of the words.

- material could be stronger as could the stucture.

To paraphrase an old definition of mandala, Your Song is a song that contains more than it can hold. Very nice.