All Comments on '06' Humming Bird'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The metaphor's so apt, when love is found the heart's beat does so quicken.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hummingbird's lullaby...

What beautiful images this poem conjures up to invade the senses. I was especially enthralled by this verse:

Sweetness comes,

In one's back yard.

When the time,

Is right.

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
I like Birds

enjoin your rite

<winkz

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