by rene_houston
Delightful anticipation of sharing ten thousand kisses. A sweet solid foundation for which to build upon.
I thought it was very good. As far as the spacing it took my eyes all over. Needs regrouping loved the words very good indeed.
the double spacing here worked against you. With your phrasing the poem would be better suited with the lines meandering across the page. otherwise, pretty good.
jim : )