All Comments on '4:34 a.m.'

What a way to describe a wake-up call; not really so different from that well-known woody.

Are cock-rocking, <br>

stunningly<br>

arresting.<br><br>

Breath-arrested, joyous reception<br>

to the easy-swing bat against ball<br>

perfection, before effortless flight-arc<br>

towards smiling horizons<br>

of satisfaction in your words<br><br>

This made me feel like a honey bee, drawn to the sweet nectar at the center of that flower, for a sip, a sup.

Now if you had a big toy collection it would always be vibrating.

Keep up the hot writtings.