All Comments on '4 Pumpkin'

i was prepared to dislike because i hate the substituting numbers-for-leters thing - but this is marvy!!

excellent cadence, excellent choice of words. i wish someone would write this kind of stuff about my pumpkin.

Do you guys do this? i thought it was an American thing!

Wonderful cadence and rhymes-- I enjoyed it very much.

Fly

Interesting structure, as well. Neat little poem.

I would guess that there aren't too many pumpkin poems on Lit.!!

A mite jealous ~ such a well crafted read!

A Pumpkin endures the incisions ~ prepared to give his all.

Well crafted bit of fluff.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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