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All Comments on 'A Ballad for My Buxom Lover'

by Peter_Kacalanos

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AddToWaterAddToWaterover 15 years ago
Fun & Playful

A very fun and playful poem. The writer displays true affection for the recipient while having a little naughty fun at the same time. I like that balance. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Not very good, but nice try rhyming 'clitty' and 'pretty.' Keep writing and I'm sure you will come up with some better stuff.

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