All Comments on 'A Breath Out Of Tune'

in many parts and crescendoes. TK U MLJ LV NV

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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Desperately joining the hordes in a feeding frenzy as they look to - heaven for help. Does salvation come from above or from within...

Another lovely 'Randi' piece

With YDD praise, no less!

keep wring hun, and forget about numbers..every piece is so well written!

thanks for sharing!xo

Especially the "god eat god" stanza. I've been searchin for the grail- hallelujah!

Please let her keep her wits and her faith in self! Beautiful poem, Ms. Grail; I can feel the sweltering heat of the tent.

A relatively fresh voice presents

a complete and well structured/thought

poem of interesting imagery.

Some nice word play

with meaning, rhyme, and alliteration.

A good read.

I liked it alot.

Keep writing

: )

...stuff. So flowing and graceful. Magnificent reading.