All Comments on 'A Cherokee Rose: 'Hunting Hearts''

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Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
a painted story

Im getting addicted to these Art. Keep up the story-telling charms, its magical :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I usually

have to wait til I have more time to ponder the long writes ..but this reads so smooth...I shall pass this on to my dear cherokee friend whitewolf.she'd be blessed...take care/blue

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
Now I'll be hunting...

not for hearts, but for the next chapter of our Cherokee rose. <wink> Art, you are truly the poet fable creator! And I am so deeply honored that you have invited Me to help in My small way with the remaining chapters to this Indian epic - thank you, "Fable Man"!!! <grin>

Vixxx

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
love it!

I love it ...but you know that since i read it before you submitted it! LOL don't stop with the next one...though...keep it going...

only you can make a poem tell a full story! great work Art!

Kisses,

T

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittabout 19 years ago
WOW!!!

This is so GOOD!! It is the best yet!!! I like it so much when you write about the Cherokee Rose. It is so easy to understand and so good in feeling!!! Thank you Zen Master Art for sharing so much of your insite!!! 5 is not high as it should be!!!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Once again...

this was a very engaging passage and only keeps getting better.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
you have my...

vote on this installment. it's a smooth read. i'm thinking that since this is about hunting hearts, i've detected a slight alteration in mood, especially since the hunting is proving that it isn't as easy to get as thought. great read art!!.......don

cloudycloudyabout 19 years ago
Wonderful!

You do me so much honor with your words. Thank you, my friend.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

The epic continues,

the tale's well told;

with love and lust

and turning cold

and warmth restored

with lust anew

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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A rose is a rose is a rose...except for Cherokee Rose, she is something else. No time to write anymore, must read next installment.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SQUAWS TEEPEES AND BUCKS

tribal fantasy and clans differ, TK U MLJ LV NV

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