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by annagraham
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twelveoonealmost 17 years ago*& worthy little nothing
I like this, this part sags though, a little forced.
The donor’s selling
yesterday as tomorrow.
He promises happiness,
he delivers sorrow.
Otther parts expand and collapse, quite nicely.
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