All Comments on 'A country lane'

I love the description, the bucolic feel. Fourth stanza is a little iffy, but all in all, a good poem.

This is really quite nice and I think it has the potential to be even better. I was a little unsure about "hedgerows grow." It sounded strange, at first, but I think it worked better after saying it a few times.

and quite honestly, you could possibly put this into a villenelle....I'd try it if I were you, might work even better~

~Honey

A moment of simple pleasure

From a simple life that

Eludes us...

This beautiful bucolic poem is a splash of color delight with its beautiful imagery. One word picture follows on the literary heels of another as we savor the richness of the delightful images. Reminiscent of Country Lanes everywhere.

only what it means to me. TK U MLJ LV NV