All Comments on 'A Kiss'

There's many a kiss:

Each will add to your bliss

Though the touch may be fleeting

It's the best form of greeting.

Try exploring the different types of kisses to build on the theme you have initiated so well. SO.

This grl obviously understands kissing and has a knack for communicating her thoughts. Dayum!! Tell me more, avrgblkgrl, tell me more!

So thoughtful, arousing, enticing, an amazing work. And this was just a kiss......

Hi R!

I've been reading your stuff while you're on vacation and I figured I'd leave you a comment here. Love it. Keep it up, please.

Your poem is great. I love it:-)

My appreciation could only be expressed in a kiss from my lips to yours... Well done!

I loved this poem and your stories. I always look for more than just a quick fuck story; need something more intelligent than that.

Your picture is lovely. I'd like to see more.

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To your work, I feel the first four lines are the poem, the rest is a descriptive of the four lines. Which helps build a narration but all of it is implied in your start.

5 stars all day & night...

This sweet poem was spot on! A moment, a lifetime, yes. Beautifully written.

Sometimes a kiss can mean so much more - sometimes it means everything!!!!!

When kissing - I never want to stop! I get lost in the kissing!

every K_ _ _ begins with a K and ends with a possible _ _ _K, TK U MLJ LCV NV

is like a good piss, it goes on and on and can get you wet.