All Comments on 'A Maze ment?'

there may be a cave-in near by. TK U MLJ LV NV

would be better without the words broken, except possibly here

arrested pur suit and per pen

be curious as to the reason for the broken words

good line, rich in r, int rhyme speeds it along, till it hits parade, where you want the slow down

mind ran behind running creatures parade

who said theater's dead?

i would have punctuated, and ends well without the gimmick, just my opin

5ed, although the 4 was tempting

Amazement ! Amazin ' device /ploy left me abs. Amazed !!

a fucking

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Piece of shite from

a po

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Who loves to write

CRAP AND PUNCTUA

ate weirdlee and the

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Criticize those who write Villanelles

Because they have

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No idea what the

fuck they

mean.

there was once a time when experimentation with ones poetry and poetic style was welcome here. I gave it a five just for being what I feel was a well thought out work. Just because it is different doesn't mean it is bad or the poet doesn't know what they mean. Every poetic style is open for interpretation, even styles that someone doesn't like. I detest end-rhyming poetry. I have read junk written as a sonnet ( i.e.) that was awful just to force it to fit a certain meter. Keep up the good work, ignore those who choose to denigrate and bully.

It seems to me, since it makes a reference to theater, maybe that was the intent when the words were broken up. I have read other work similar and I call them anonymous metaphors. Makes sense to me :)

~NJ