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very thoughtfull poem~

I enjoy reading your poetry.

A moving piece

With sadness' tears

Masked by joy and happiness.

Touching moment as a father prepares to give away his daughter in marriage. Poignant and endearing.

poem laced with a touch of sadness as thoughts of her late mother surfaced...as she dressed for the wedding. Well done.