All Comments on 'A Painted Dream'

and sad.

I see the paris loft where he paints her....

a very nice poem

Thank you

I find the theme and image interesting,

but the meter and rhyme slip occasionally,

the rhyme particularly near the end.

I wish the last stanza was stronger

so that the wrap-up could support the entire poem.

Appreciate the comments, both of you.

Just that image of the ideal woman drawn

Oh so near and never to be reached.