All Comments on 'A Peek At My Heart'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Enjoyable

A personal poem that rhymes, haven't read one of those in a long time! Seriously, great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
eh....

it reeks of "OH, I am such a victim" lousy, as poetry goes

WickedEveWickedEveabout 15 years ago
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I'm not a big fan of a simple AABB rhyme pattern. By the way, I need to wear my glasses. At first I thought the title was A Peck At My Heart. ouch. lol

amicusamicusover 13 years ago
smiles

"I am much more impressed by the size of your heart."

Thnis is a special poem, and a special emotion that perhaps few can comprehend...When my first wife divorced me, I questioned, 'but I thought you loved me...', "I do..." she said, "I worship you, but I cannot go where you go..."

I wish she could have...but...it was not to be..

Thank you...

Amicus

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