All Comments on 'A Perfect World'

Your writing shows the underbelly of reality so to the point i'm a beliver

A prayer for change.

This plaintive poem is the best reason to adopt a 'do unto others' Law. Now, our politicians will explain how it works. NOT!

your stories might be a bit repatitve, but your poetry is very true and i can tell u write from the heart, and that makes up for it being a little rough around the edges. so keep writing my brutha.

I know what you mean it seems like every time that I make a comment about how horrible War really is; I even go as far as saying that War is UNprofitable. And how disgusting it is I get eaten alive, bullied into thinking I’m worse than Hitler himself. And just short of the devil. I believe that if we did not have War we would be one giant step closer towards peace and making this earth as close to heaven as we can. After all let’s face it War is basically Revenge a large scale. Please no mare let’s not do it. And let’s be better than that. I know for a fact that humans are better than that. After all haven’t humans evolved enough to the point where we could resolve our deference’s and problems peacefully, after all it is depicted in movies and TV shows all the time. Such as in Star Trek and all of the Superman adaptations. I was wrong (no surprise). In the words of Ben (Obi-Wan) Kenobi: So uncivilized. I though humans evolved more than just looks but once again I was wrong. And finally it’s not just War comments it also seems that no matter what kind of comments I try to make I always get burned at the stake just after being crucified.