All Comments on 'a perspective numbed perception'

there is a lot here to absorb. i'm focusing on perception....that numbness so to speak. i'm tending to think that there is a pessimism of sort that is built in the piece. i could be wrong however. but there is one line i really dug and it is this.....*the darkness still stalking our heels*. throughout the piece i see a lot of movement. it seems to flutter, a little up, a little down but very consistent. i enjoyed the read.

this is how I would feel on a rollercoaster.

I find it interesting that you had the choice to disembark, and didnt.

Interesting in a way that makes me know I will read it again...and again

The black hole ~

The nothingness of everything indistinquishable...

A reflection of the world and the human condition. Forced against their will to surrender their rights. Dark images pervade this rendering.