All Comments on 'A poem for Peter'

Ache, tear. Lesse hope this happens for you soon.

It will, Oldbear, it will happen soon. I'm on it.

Keep catching different nuances. Starting in dispair, but really hopeful. Loving lady, strong lady. Hug for you. (0)

It's actually a rewrite of a poem I wrote back in May, but reversed the roles in this version. Not that anyone but me probably knows lol.

I think I have read all of yours - but who knows, and the memory is the first to go... thank God

You brought me to tears. Powerfully beautiful and achingly sad.

Off for this one Lesse! You portrayed the emotion so well here, futility, hope, acceptance all in there :)

How can I go back to May? Arrrrrrrgggghhhhhhhh.

It wasn't posted on lit. It was a personal poem I sent directly to the recipient. Sorry for the confusion. I, in no way ever, want to go back to May.

Thanks - given the nature of this poem I certainly understand. Except I thought you had a lot more poems up that just weren't listed. Damn.

and much enjoyed :)

not in the mood for ....Destitute - without means of subsistence - Utterly lacking; devoid.