by Maria2394
As one with a sword, I'm thoroughly subdued, but I like it that way so I wouldn't be good spoils of war. I think Public Comments should allow emoticons because this poem would get the roaring kitty for sure!
Imagination has been put to good use here. I really liked the first line in particular. "Receptor" sounds almost regal, something soon to be Queen Elizabeth might have said. Don't feel the same about "pussy." The use of it in the title suggested irony to me whereas the whole poem suggested suppressed anger ready to be unleashed.
And roll away the critics:)
I love the rhythmic strength of this, the in-your-faceness. Total delight.
Exactly what i came here in need of and you gave it to me! perfect.