All Comments on 'A Reasonable Demand'

by Randi Grail

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lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
Yes, yes, yes...

Poetic and hot...I'm so jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Very cheeky

"feed me Pavlovian truths

of pleasure peaks and pain

and I will heed to every notion"

Pavlov would roll over and sport a big bone reading this! Thanks. Much enjoyed ;)

KundalinguiniKundalinguinialmost 20 years ago
Absolutely

a reasonable demand. We all need it sometime. This is so hot you can feel the sweat. It's a wonder you didn't burn your fingers on the keyboard, Randi.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
This...

...is blazing!! -- which is not easy to do poetically. Wonderful job, Randi!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Thanks for this

Sweaty, hot, lusty fuck! It feels so good!

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
"mouth clutching air..."

and mine is trying to catch my breath! I feel like this poem just gave me a handjob. Loved it, Randi!

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i loved the rhythm too..

this is great randi..

delicious in content!

yummmmmm!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I'll

say it again

Yummy

Great rhythm, great phrases, wonderful passion

Thank you

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