by My Erotic Tale
can turn a rose to blue...wow...now he is a charmer....winks...blue
that this is my spot i love the most. something about doodle being all charred up.....*LOL*.
Coughing and hacking in a cloud of smoke
Captain Doodle charred, felt Scarlett's throat.
"She's not breathing," He sat in panic
no pulse was found, as he removed her bonnet.
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i'm not sure, but i'm gonna show you this to see if it is what you had intended:
That was when the Union camp explode [exploded?]
knocking to the ground, Miss Scarlett Rose.
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i'm enjoying this as it unfolds....nicely done.....don