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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
oh that captain doodle

can turn a rose to blue...wow...now he is a charmer....winks...blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i have to say....

that this is my spot i love the most. something about doodle being all charred up.....*LOL*.

Coughing and hacking in a cloud of smoke

Captain Doodle charred, felt Scarlett's throat.

"She's not breathing," He sat in panic

no pulse was found, as he removed her bonnet.

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i'm not sure, but i'm gonna show you this to see if it is what you had intended:

That was when the Union camp explode [exploded?]

knocking to the ground, Miss Scarlett Rose.

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i'm enjoying this as it unfolds....nicely done.....don

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